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The rain comes again,
trying to cleanse all of pain,
but only drowning us.
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Dreamworld88 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Student Writer
What style of poetry is this? It is similar to a haiku, but the last line has six syllables, instead of five.
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CompanyInDeath Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It is... it's a badly written haiku :s but I preferred it that way so I left it like that :)
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Dreamworld88 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student Writer
Eh, you can always change the category to free verse.
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ItsKocot Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Writer
Huh. That seems to have escalated quickly.
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CompanyInDeath Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It doesn't take very long to drown, especially when you don't realise that's what is happening :)
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ItsKocot Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Student Writer
true enough! Two options: accept it and drown quicker, or fight it... and drown quicker.
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CompanyInDeath Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very true, very true indeed, I sense a poem in that phrase.
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ItsKocot Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Writer
Funny you should say that, it's more or less a paraphrase of your own poem! XD You did an excellent job and should know that. Keep it up!
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